July 21

This lesson was the first lesson after our essays were graded. In my essay, there were a lot of parts I need to improve more.

For example, there were parts where I had spelling mistakes, and also what I do many times is repeating the same words at the start of the sentence more than two times. What I think I need to do more is to have a peer check and also check by my self more because some of the mistakes that were mentioned was a mistake that I wouldn't make if I had a peer check and check by my self word by words.

We have lots of time to improve the essays until next time when we submit. So I want to make sure I have fixed everything and be able to submit a better essay than this time.