January 28th

In this lesson, we looked at some of the people’s essays to see what they did well or what they need to improve. However, there was one problem which is that most of the people in our class did not put the link to the essay in the master document, and because of this, we wasted a lot of time. So I thought from now on we have to follow those instructions.

When we were looking at other people’s essays, I learnt few things that I need to change in my individual essay. For example, making space between each line. Before I used to think that fitting in one page looked much cleaner, so I always made no space between each line. However, now I think I should because it is much easier to read and also write comments.

The essay is due next class so I will have to work on things that was mentioned in the class, and at the end, check my grammar and spelling because there was a mistake in my team essay.