January 21st

In this lesson, we were able to check our individual essay we made ourselves using the body paragraph we wrote in our group essay. Before this lesson, I have put together the body paragraph, the introduction and conclusion so in this lesson,  I only needed to improve more of the paragraph and add things that I am missing. 

What I improved in this lesson are the words I used and the way I write the sentences.  I made sure I had at least 8 paragraph in each paragraph. I also made sure my grammar is right because it won't make sense if it was wrong. 

For the next lesson, I want to work more at home to improve my individual essay. For example, my AWL's, and also the readability because the higher the percentages are, the better the paragraph will be.