November 26

This class was the last day to work on our essays. We were able to have the whole class and the time until the next day morning. We mostly work individually because we had to work on our AWL which I haven't really reached yet. We also haven't finished with our reference so we had to do it the way Mr Paterson taught in this lesson which is the MLA format.

We were working hard until the end of the class and the rest of the day but I thought we need to improve more. However, I am not clearly sure where we need to improve so I want to hear the feedback from Mr Paterson so that our group know what to improve because right now especially me, I am having trouble to find where our group need to improve.

Next class is the day we get our feedback. Personally, I want to get my feedback as soon as possible because the things we have to improve is clear and we can improve it when other teams are getting feedback. However, if we get feedback later, we still don't know so we can't work on the essay.