November 25th

In this class, we were able to work on our essay which is due in the next class. We were done with most of the part and the only left was improving each part of the essay. We still had things we had to improve by checking each other's paragraph and the introduction and conclusion. Some of the things I need to improve in my paragraph is the amount of the sentence I have in each paragraph, the AWL and the readability.

For the amount of the sentence, I am not reaching the minimum amount of the sentence which is 8 sentences. So I tried to add more sentences by adding more information. For the AWL's and the readability, I tried to increase the percentage of the AWL, but I couldn't really reach the amount of what we should have.

The next class is our due date of the essay so we will have to work on more after school to finish off with improving the essay and also check each other's paragraph to make sure there aren't any things I did wrong or the other group member did wrong.