November 5th
In this class, we talked about a classical 5 paragraph essays. In my previous school, I had lots is chances to write essays with the basic 5 paragraph essays so I was familiar with the introduction, body paragraph 1, 2, 3 and the conclusion. I also knew that the first two paragraphs are for the hook, and also, there is a statement we say at the start and write the reasons in the body paragraphs so I thought we will write an essay with this strategy. However, it was a different way than I thought it will be.
We are going to write an essay within our groups about the presentation we were working on for these few months. For the title, introduction and the conclusion is the same, but the body paragraph was different and that made me a bit confusing because I have never written an essay with the form we have to write with. In the body paragraph, as a whole essay, we have to divide into 3 different categories, but in this essay, we have to divide that 3 categories into another 3 categories. This means that for example, if I was writing about vacation and someone else is writing about homework and someone else is writing about recess, this is already 3 categories but we have to make another 3 categories to explain with more detailed information. So in my vacation, I should have 3 other things like the problems, why it is s problem and solutions, and at first, I didn't understand what this meant, but later on, I understood and started writing my part of the essay.
Some things I have never thought of is the conclusion. There are two types of conclusion depending on how much the audience agree on the statement. However, I always just repeat what I was saying and wrap it up, and in this class, I finally noticed about the mistake and how I should improve in the essays I am going to write in the future.
We are going to write an essay within our groups about the presentation we were working on for these few months. For the title, introduction and the conclusion is the same, but the body paragraph was different and that made me a bit confusing because I have never written an essay with the form we have to write with. In the body paragraph, as a whole essay, we have to divide into 3 different categories, but in this essay, we have to divide that 3 categories into another 3 categories. This means that for example, if I was writing about vacation and someone else is writing about homework and someone else is writing about recess, this is already 3 categories but we have to make another 3 categories to explain with more detailed information. So in my vacation, I should have 3 other things like the problems, why it is s problem and solutions, and at first, I didn't understand what this meant, but later on, I understood and started writing my part of the essay.
Some things I have never thought of is the conclusion. There are two types of conclusion depending on how much the audience agree on the statement. However, I always just repeat what I was saying and wrap it up, and in this class, I finally noticed about the mistake and how I should improve in the essays I am going to write in the future.
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