October 28th

Same as the previous class, Mr Paterson continued giving each groups a deep feedbacks about the presentation. While he does that, my group watches a video of our presentation because I forgot to send them the video and they had to watch it during the class. After that, we I was looking at our presentation and our websites and tried to find things we need to improve. However, what I thought is that I want to change things after we get feedback because I don’t want to change anything that doesn’t need to be changed, and also, I thought that there are more places to improve and we just don’t notice it.

After the first group got the feedback, it was our turn to get the feedback. When I got the feedback from Mr Paterson, I kind of thought the same thing as what he was saying like the time I spoke was too short, and also I kept my had together and not releasing it. However, when he talked about the slides of the solution and conclusion, I finally noticed what was bad about the presentation slides. The feedback we got for the solution slides, is that we had to put 3 pictures and write a word underneath so that the audience will remember what we were talking about. I thought this was important because I think the audience are just listening and I think in that audience, there are someone who are not listening. So for those people, we could remind them what we were talking about.

Th e rest of the lesson, we had time to improve our presentation slides and our websites. We started making our brochure which we haven’t made yet, and we finished off there. In the next lesson, Mr Paterson said that he will be talking about the brochure so I think we could use some of the information he is going to talk about next class.