October 21st

In this lesson, Mr Paterson continued to give each group more detailed feedback about the presentation, and while he does that, the rest of the teams including us was doing what we need to be doing.  For example, improving our presentation, improving the websites and so on. What we did is improve our websites more. 

In our websites, we were supposed to put all three section's information on one page. However, we separated all three sections in three pages so we thought we will have to change that, and also, I personally thought that we should put the infographic on the same page with the information about what we talked about in our presentation.

However, there were also somethings we need to improve in our presentation we couldn't improve in this class which we should improve. For example, changing the pictures which do not relate to what we are talking about (summary, limitation, conclusion). We weren't able to notice when we were preparing the presentation but as we were watching the other group's presentation, we noticed that some of our presentation's slide pictures are not matching with what we were talking about. 

Same as last class, there wasn't time for us to have more detailed feedback so I think I could watch the video of our presentation and find more things I did well and more things I should improve.