June 24th

This day was the day we started presenting what we have done in the past 2 months. We didn't present today. In today's presentation, I think I understood how much this school needs to be improved, and why it needs to be changed.

When I was watching other people presentation, Mr. Paterson pointed out some things that had to be fixed. For example, they can't look at the screen because it is for the audience and we should know what we are saying. Another thing is that when we change speakers, we have to say the next person's name and what they are talking about.

After I watched those presentations and listened to the advise Mr. Paterson gave us, I thought that when we present, I want to be able to do all the things Mr. Paterson told us to do.

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