May 13th
In this class (May 13th), we went through the blogs to see if it was working because some weren't shared or it was not the right URL. We have taught how to use a website called feedly.com. This website is where we could put all our blogs together to see all at the same time. I thought this website was useful because this website, also tells us which blog I didn't read yet.
As we were going through the blogs, Mr. Paterson realized about the way we write paragraphs. For example, a good paragraph has about 8-11 sentences. Good paragraphs also have at least 3 paragraph where there is a topic sentence that says what you are going to talk about. Then there is a paragraph where you go further and talking more specifically about what we did. Then in the last paragraph, it will be a conclusion about the lesson.
I don't really use a website like freedly.com, so I wasn't interested. However, now I think using a similar kind of website isn't a bad thing because it takes time for me to go back to our class document then find the person's blog which I have not read when there are websites where I could see clearly which one I read already and which one I didn't read it yet.
As we were going through the blogs, Mr. Paterson realized about the way we write paragraphs. For example, a good paragraph has about 8-11 sentences. Good paragraphs also have at least 3 paragraph where there is a topic sentence that says what you are going to talk about. Then there is a paragraph where you go further and talking more specifically about what we did. Then in the last paragraph, it will be a conclusion about the lesson.
I don't really use a website like freedly.com, so I wasn't interested. However, now I think using a similar kind of website isn't a bad thing because it takes time for me to go back to our class document then find the person's blog which I have not read when there are websites where I could see clearly which one I read already and which one I didn't read it yet.
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